One
compulsive reader’s observations ...
PART THE SECOND
On page 3
of the original comic, the chapter title is on two lines, aligned left, with
the credits on right. Also, the title
and credits are a little wider than the panel grid.
In the bound
versions, the chapter title is one line filling this whole space, and the title
is within the width of the panels. The
credits are gone, too.
On the same
page, I don’t understand why the flag for Blake’s coffin was folded, but not in the ceremonial triangle.
You’d expect that this would take place, hein? In case you wondered if the triangle is a
military-only tradition, it’s not. The triangle fold is a sign of respect for
the flag, not for the person being interred.
Of course, one might argue that the non-triangle
shape means that Edward Blake was not
involved in Adrian Veidt’s Pyramid Deliveries conspiracy!
Sally
Jupiter’s reminiscences of the Minutemen are illustrated with the taking of the
group portrait in 1940. Take a gander at
the panel showing the photographer in his shroud.
Call me
weird, but that white shape reminds me of Hira Manish’s illustration of The
Infamous Squid (this panel is on page 11 of Chapter Eight.)
In that
same 1940 flashback, we’re privy to Blake’s attempted rape of Sally.
It’s only
appropriate that Sally scratches Blake at the same place where in 1971, Blake’s
Vietnamese dolly would slash him.
In the 1966
“organizational meeting” for the Crimebusters, Blake is reading the New
York Gazette.
It’s only
curious because the masthead has the month and year, but no date. “April, 1966.”
On page 26,
can it be coincidental that while Rorschach’s journal talks about “heads
between teats,” Blake is hitting the wall with his head between the teats of
the nekkid girl on the wall?
On the last
page of Chapter Two, the comic’s final panel has only the clock.
It’s the bound
versions which have Elvis Costello lyrics.
On “page 8”
of Under
the Hood, written in 1962, Mason says the vigilantes are on “America’s
West Coast.” Wouldn’t the “EAST coast,”
like New York, be much more accurate? Mothman
was in Connecticut, and the Comedian was cleaning up “the city’s” waterfronts,
in NYC.
On “page
10,” the last page of this chapter, the paperclipped note about forthcoming
chapters does not appear in bound volumes.
This is a
scan of my Graphitti copy.
Thanks for
obsessing with me! Stay tuned for my
fixations on Watchmen, Chapter Three, next week.